I like the story rather then this poem.in their own way both are extraordinary but I think the secret revels very quickly ,openly in poem while story ur description keeps busy and reader crocheting web abt their upcoming relationship and suddenly it takes quick turn.
I like the story rather then this poem.in their own way both are extraordinary but I think the secret revels very quickly ,openly in poem while story ur description keeps busy and reader crocheting web abt their upcoming relationship and suddenly it takes quick turn.
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